JessieYun's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[DG812 - Revive]

As an electro beginner. Brilliant. Just brilliant.

[Heart / Contemplative music]

Good job on working this. I love that piano line that matched with the heartbeat. Nice work on the slow epic part at the back.

N3PHRON responds:

Thank you so much!

[LM - Obliviate]

As a person who tends to enjoy perfect harmony, this sounds really messed up.

It was fine from 0:00-0:16 - it sounded a bit interesting. But as it passed 0:17, the mallets sound started to sound weird. That was still fine for me since I understood that you were trying to add some more creativity. But then, after a few seconds, it destroyed my hope. It remained weird until the end of the song. No chord progressions, no surprising elements, just a weird chord lines from the mallets and the same old wompy bassline. I had to turn off this song half-way.

And also, I don't even know if this is a Video Game track. Why not just turn this into Experimental? That could make much more sense.

I hope this doesn't make you offended or anything, but I just wanted to share my thoughts with you, as another fellow musician. I know that you're trying to be creative, and experiment the instruments you have. But it still needs work. A lot of work. I'm not good at teaching things, but all I can say is to listen to many tracks and try to research the elements inside it. That could help you create better tracks in the future. I also listened to your track, "Incendio", and honestly that was much better than this one, even you followed the same method. So yes, even if you used online tools with limitations, you can still create a better piece.

I give you great encouragement to try to keep working on it. Keep up the good work.

LordMoldemort responds:

Thank you for the criticism. It helps me to learn from other musicians. I changed the genre to experimental.

[You're the Same]

Oh my goodness, wish I am capable to play that beautiful piece with my violin.
This is so full of emotion and tenderness. Brillant piece. *standing ovation*

LucidShadowDreamer responds:

Thanks a lot, Jessie! I'd like to learn to play the violin too, but that would take me a looooong time :D

[Heart=Love, Pause, Quit]

Catchy melody, nice structure! Keep it up!

[Shall we DANCE? in the Fire -2018 ver- (Teaser)]

Nice intro! Looking forward to hearing your full work!

[Geoplex - Windborn]

MY GOSH. How did you compose that marvelous piece? This is one of the best beautiful pieces I've heard on Newgrounds. You're really talented. You should make more of these.

Geoplex responds:

Thank you! Sorry, don't know why I didn't reply to this, I really appreciate the comment. I will be uploading more orchestral stuff in the future :)